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1 The diet difference is just one of the many possible reasons that cause the different rate of such disease between Asians and North Americans.

2 Even the diet is the main reason, there are lots of food, eaten by Asian people everyday, never appears on the menus of recipes of North Americans.

3 What’s more, suppose that the soy, along with the phytochemicals called isoflavones it contains, indeed help the Asian people to prevent the depression, no evidence is shown that the same thing would work among the North Americans.

So, it is not a safe conclusion drawn at the end of this argument.

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Imagine you were a farmer living with other farmers in the middle of Oxfordshire 200 years ago, and one day there comes a man with a stack of paper with lines, images and figures that absolutely means nothing to you and your fellows on it, telling you that there must be a way to make a huge machine out of iron, powered by fuel, that will take you and your families to a place called China on the other side of the globe in 9 hours. What will you say about this idea and what will you do to this guy? “Totally out of his/her mind” might be the slightest reaction. But this brave man is telling the truth, it is just that the truth is so hard to be accepted at that time.

There has been so many times on the history that important truths appearing as a rediculous job and laughed, even fiercely attacked, by the rest of the world. the man who think weight won’t affect the falling speed of an object had to throw two metal balls from the top of a tower to prove he was right; the theory of continents are giant floating board on the surface of earth was treated as dream talking at the first; and the person who told that the earth is not the center of the universe was burnt to death. Even in the last ten years of 20^th century, people who though internet could be huge and hot were laughed by Bill Gates and the Microsoft empire behind him. We have to ask why – what is the reason that makes the truths, especially those really important truths contributed a lot in the human history, so unacceptable at the time when they were born.

Fitstly, sometimes the truth itself hurts. You must admit lies are more welcomed by us and this is buried in human nature. It is not to say that we human like lying, yet it is true that most of us will avoid to tell truth when we think it is not a apropriate time to speak it out. How many times have you pretend to enjoy tasteless pasta just because it was made by your friend? How many times did you have to say “well it looks perfect on you” when friend showing you their new bought hat, which actually looks like several piece of distorted cloth? And why would people do that? Because we know that sometimes the truth hurt, we need to not tell it to survive.

And when it comes to things like “the earth is a globe”, it hurts most, and people just choose not to believe or laugh at it, since when this kind of truths newly come out, they are always against some sort of “common sense”, which might has been wrongly existing for hundreds of years. To tell people this kind of reality is like to destroy part of their world. What’s more, these important truths are always far more advanced concerning either with science or some other areas, people just can’t understand them. They are so different ideas that people could not believe. It is the same as the reaction you’ll receive when telling a kid that Santa Clause is actually their parents.

And imagine the rest of the world all believe in Santa Clause and the gift thing, you are the only one who is aware that this is all fake, will you be brave enough to say? That is the third reason why some truths begin as outrageous – there are only a few people who knows it at first. They are weak; they cannot sound as loud as the rest of world can. Even if they can reason the truth perfectly, there is no way to widely spread their voice, especially in the old time. When lies are repeated millions of time by millions of people, they are strong enough to defeat the truths.

Yet, this sort of important truth telling and hurting thing is fading, partly because of the raised education level, partly because of the methods of communication becoming so various and powerful, which makes information reaching people easily and fast. And the most important thing is that protecting different thoughts and ideas gradually becomes a new global “common sense”. With this improvement and progress, we shall see that those astonishing truths will have more chances and easier to be accepted by the world.

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Although revitalization is indeed a must path for any enterprise, it yet absolutely doesn’t ensure the success of an organization. Those who are in power are after all human beings, they get aged and head to the same end as other people do. So any business entity on the earth, no matter it is a company or a government, will go through the process of leadership level re-arrangement. However, only some of them can survive it, fewer become successful, and a lot more vanish after the revitalization. And in some certain circumstances, things look even better when a outstanding leader stays in the key position for a long time.

The Apple Inc. is such a perfect example. In early 80’s last century, Steve Jobs and his partner established the company, and it soon became a star in the personal computer market. However, in late 80’s Steve was fired for some reasons by his own company, which perfectly fits what is described in the quoted claim. However, the company’s business went down like a temprature meter in the winter of Alaska. The revitalization didn’t bring Apple to a higher submit, it was the other way around. Yet in the late 90’s, Apple called Steve back, and in the following ten years, he remained in the corporation as CEO, leading Apple to be reborn as the most successful IT company in the first ten years of the new century. No one could tell if the revitalization didn’t occur at all, what a monster Apple would have become now.

On the other hand, Apple now is also facing problems. The great CEO’s health condition is dropping, and many observers’ attiditude is negtive when asked what if the post-Steve time finally comes, since Steve has proved that he is such a vital role to the company that it seems no one else can take his place. This worry is more than reasonable, if a company, or other enterprise, replies on a certain individual – sometimes a small group of individuals – too much, people would have enough reason to say the future of this organization is unclear.

In contrary to the Apple, the other IT giant, Microsoft, acted quite smoother when Bill Gates quitted from the CEO position to the chief technology officer, and finally got rid off the company, dedicating to the charity business. Microsoft might be not as creative as Apple, however, it surely has a much better management style in the state of art.

And that leads us to the real answer to the question between the revitalization and the organization. The buttom line is to ensure the full capable person in the correct position at the right time; meanwhile, the body needs a well designed personel system to keep the danger of personality cult out of the door.

如果你的男友是IT界的工作者
是程序员 测试员 构架师
你一定好好体贴他
因为他在每天面对各种语言 面对代码 面对机房的各种机器
总是不停地微笑
还要开很多的会
重复着敲打键盘和挥舞鼠标等各种动作
工作一天了
他们真的很累很累

如果你的男友是IT界的工作者
是程序员 测试员 构架师
你真的要学会煮饭
因为他的厨艺可能不好
因为他也没有时间煮饭
但你不需要长得太漂亮
因为你只需要在他下班之后
说一句：“baby，你辛苦了！”

如果你的男友是IT界的工作者
是程序员 测试员 构架师
请你多抽出一点时间 来陪他 体谅他
因为他每一天都在敲打键盘
bug里来 漏洞里去 早出 晚归
有的时候还要去和SB的客户沟通
被骂到狗血淋头还需要陪着笑脸

他每一天，都必须待在机房里面
面对各种机器对他的辐射
辛苦切换着各种服务器
整天盯着各种各样的屏幕
一行一行的调着代码
当他疲惫归来时
请不要抱怨他 给他一点安慰吧
洗完澡之后给他按按摩
抱着他舒服的睡去

如果你的男友是IT界的工作者
是程序员 测试员 构架师
你要心疼他 支持他
不要和别人一样伤害他